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請閱讀下面文字,并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1.用約30個詞概括上述利用排名( ratings)進(jìn)行消費(fèi)的現(xiàn)象;
2.談?wù)勀闳绾慰创M(fèi)排名,然后用2-3個理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。
【寫作要求】
1.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句;
2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;
3.不必寫標(biāo)題
【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
內(nèi)容完整,語言規(guī)范,語篇連貫,詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。
【思路點(diǎn)撥】
今年作文仍然是讀寫作文,即先用30詞概括閱讀材料,然后針對材料中的話題寫一篇議論文談看法。首先要認(rèn)真閱讀兩段有關(guān)消費(fèi)排名現(xiàn)象及觀點(diǎn)的純文字材料,然后進(jìn)行比較和分析,表明態(tài)度,作出價值判斷。
文章首段要簡要介紹兩段材料,第一段材料為一對母子買旅行箱看了網(wǎng)上的評論,結(jié)果買回來的旅行箱質(zhì)量很好。第二段材料為一幫人去餐館吃飯,看了on-line rating,結(jié)果飯菜很不好吃,從而凸顯出online rating的不靠譜。
然后寫你對online rating的看法,表明觀點(diǎn),注意用2-3個論據(jù)來支撐自己的看法。
文章屬于議論文,要注意主題句的使用,論點(diǎn)之間要注意有條理。文章可主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時,第三人稱來寫。
【范文】
Possible version one:
As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.
There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.
Possible version two:
Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.
There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the product or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice for some to pay
for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales.
Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.